Monday, February 13, 2006

When!!

When I look at the moon,
I see you smiling at me;
When I glance around the stars,
I find you winking at me;
When I try to look at the sun,
I feel the intensity of your love for me;
When I walk on the shore,
I see you rushing towards me;
When I hear the birds,
I hear you singing for me;
When a breeze passes by me,
I feel as if you embraced me;
When I hold a flower in my hand,
I see you admiring me in my lap;
When I am standing in the rain,
I feel the slight touch of yours on my face;
When I smell the fresh earth,
I smell your breath in it;
When I see the mirror,
I can see you in my eyes.

20 comments:

  1. i believe the poem could've gone on and on...
    nice composititon n situational [acc to the date tom :D]

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  2. hmmmmm .......... smells like fresh love

    Happy Valentine's Day, btw >:D<

    [the verification word is "LUVot"]

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  3. @mipple
    :">

    @shailesh
    hmmmmm... :-P

    @prasoon
    yes..it cud have gone on and on...but i had to stop somewhere...

    @raja
    happy V Day to u too >:D<

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  4. good one :)
    {i know who tht is for :P}

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  5. inspiration? ;)

    good one

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  6. @yashu, bhav & chandu
    thanx :-)

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  7. @Kosha

    can u make the text srolling while the background being steady and unchanging?

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  8. hey nice poem...will b watching space frm nw ;)

    ps:get a shoutbox!

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  9. @chandu
    i tried it in the start itlsef...but didnt appear pleasing...so stuck to this type...

    @alch
    :-) thanx...
    well i dont like shoutbox...

    @sarvshaktimaan
    toh khud likho na kuch :P

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  10. its simple,sweet,lovely composition
    something like just close ur eyes and all this lines comin on ur mind


    love this one ;)))))))

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  11. mebbe u gt me wrong....i dint ask u to like it!

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  12. Kosha I just came acorss your blog space..
    It's awsome....Keep it up.
    I didn't know your murmurs sound this loud...!
    Kudos and Cool Going..!!

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  13. @megs
    thanx dear :-)
    but still far behind wat u write...

    @alch
    so i dont keep things tht i dont like ;-)

    @tojo
    hey....thanx for visiting my blog :-)
    and yeah thanx for the compliment too :-)

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  14. megs blog rele rocks ...

    @kosha...try n b less selfish. X(
    i am nt finding enuf shoutboxes to shout in :(

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  15. @alch

    really...she is too good at writing :-)

    y do u want to shout?? :D

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  16. Its just the Feeling of love tht inspired to write such an emotionally satisfying simple yet powerful lyrics !!
    [:)][:)]

    I just Love ... to be in Love !!

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  17. @samyak
    yeah its true..
    love to be in love :-)

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  18. beautiful n kinda ..ro ..:P

    sometimes u really feel ur emotions in wrds ..n thats exactly happend here

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  19. I like this, the use of the ordinary exemplifies the extraordinary!!!
    cleverly written!

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