When I look at the moon,
I see you smiling at me;
When I glance around the stars,
I find you winking at me;
When I try to look at the sun,
I feel the intensity of your love for me;
When I walk on the shore,
I see you rushing towards me;
When I hear the birds,
I hear you singing for me;
When a breeze passes by me,
I feel as if you embraced me;
When I hold a flower in my hand,
I see you admiring me in my lap;
When I am standing in the rain,
I feel the slight touch of yours on my face;
When I smell the fresh earth,
I smell your breath in it;
When I see the mirror,
I can see you in my eyes.
i believe the poem could've gone on and on...
ReplyDeletenice composititon n situational [acc to the date tom :D]
hmmmmm .......... smells like fresh love
ReplyDeleteHappy Valentine's Day, btw >:D<
[the verification word is "LUVot"]
@mipple
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@shailesh
hmmmmm... :-P
@prasoon
yes..it cud have gone on and on...but i had to stop somewhere...
@raja
happy V Day to u too >:D<
good one :)
ReplyDelete{i know who tht is for :P}
inspiration? ;)
ReplyDeletegood one
simple and nice :)
ReplyDelete@yashu, bhav & chandu
ReplyDeletethanx :-)
@Kosha
ReplyDeletecan u make the text srolling while the background being steady and unchanging?
hey nice poem...will b watching space frm nw ;)
ReplyDeleteps:get a shoutbox!
@chandu
ReplyDeletei tried it in the start itlsef...but didnt appear pleasing...so stuck to this type...
@alch
:-) thanx...
well i dont like shoutbox...
@sarvshaktimaan
toh khud likho na kuch :P
its simple,sweet,lovely composition
ReplyDeletesomething like just close ur eyes and all this lines comin on ur mind
love this one ;)))))))
mebbe u gt me wrong....i dint ask u to like it!
ReplyDeleteKosha I just came acorss your blog space..
ReplyDeleteIt's awsome....Keep it up.
I didn't know your murmurs sound this loud...!
Kudos and Cool Going..!!
@megs
ReplyDeletethanx dear :-)
but still far behind wat u write...
@alch
so i dont keep things tht i dont like ;-)
@tojo
hey....thanx for visiting my blog :-)
and yeah thanx for the compliment too :-)
megs blog rele rocks ...
ReplyDelete@kosha...try n b less selfish. X(
i am nt finding enuf shoutboxes to shout in :(
@alch
ReplyDeletereally...she is too good at writing :-)
y do u want to shout?? :D
Its just the Feeling of love tht inspired to write such an emotionally satisfying simple yet powerful lyrics !!
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I just Love ... to be in Love !!
@samyak
ReplyDeleteyeah its true..
love to be in love :-)
beautiful n kinda ..ro ..:P
ReplyDeletesometimes u really feel ur emotions in wrds ..n thats exactly happend here
I like this, the use of the ordinary exemplifies the extraordinary!!!
ReplyDeletecleverly written!