Tode saare khwaab maine,
bikheri saari khushiyan.
Maine hi chupaya chand ko,
gira diye saare taare asmaan se.
Mitaya maine hi indradhanush ko,
chura li phoolon ki khusboo.
Khud hi bichaye raaste pe kaantein,
bujha di jeevan se roshini.
Bhare maine hi aankhon mein aansoo,
cheen li labon ki hansi.
Choda maine hi zindagi ka aanchal,
chuta ummeed ka daaman.
Reh gaya mere dil mein dard,
aur meri aankhon mein Siskiyan.
Thursday, February 23, 2006
Siskiyan
Tode saare khwaab maine,
bikheri saari khushiyan.
Maine hi chupaya chand ko,
gira diye saare taare asmaan se.
Mitaya maine hi indradhanush ko,
chura li phoolon ki khusboo.
Khud hi bichaye raaste pe kaantein,
bujha di jeevan se roshini.
Bhare maine hi aankhon mein aansoo,
cheen li labon ki hansi.
Choda maine hi zindagi ka aanchal,
chuta ummeed ka daaman.
Reh gaya mere dil mein dard,
aur meri aankhon mein Siskiyan.
24 comments:
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Samyak said...
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Thnx for penning down my THOUGHTS !!
maine hi fer liye doston se mooh apanaa...
choot gaya bahot pehale woh daaman dosti ka !! -
3:34 AM
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kosha said...
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tumhare thoughts :o :o
baap re tumhe kya ho gaya hai?? -
3:35 AM
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Samyak said...
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kuch bhi ho..
tumhe us se kya?? [>:P] -
3:40 AM
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kosha said...
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are...
ab mera koi friend aisa feel kar raha ho toh main nahin poochoongi kya... -
3:41 AM
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kosha said...
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@nirmal
thanx :-) -
5:10 AM
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Prasoon said...
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twas like my words penned down poetically
the most deep n awesome representation - thats what i felt..
great writing.. with a perfect title :) -
6:59 AM
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Raja said...
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saare TLTE waale paagal ho gaye hain :o
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9:37 AM
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kosha said...
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@prasoon
thanx for the compliment...
but y r u so sad??
@raja
kya hua?? -
8:43 PM
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Athena said...
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beautiful lines :))) keep penning down such beautiful poems :)
waise thnx for removing word verification :)))) -
8:56 PM
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Rhapsodising Arse said...
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It was pretty interesting to see that here you have a quote from " The Fountainhead" but then you orkut profile you just don't mention it. Just a comment. :-)
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9:45 PM
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kosha said...
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@vini
thanx dear :-)
@moser baer
well didnt feel like putting it on orkut...just like tht... -
11:50 PM
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Saras said...
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beautiful lines :)
btw yahan mujhe jaisa dikh raha hai us hisab se tume nirmal ko thanx pahle bol diya aur compliment usne baad me diya
:o
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6:57 AM
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Pramod said...
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tum bhi kavayitri ban gayi :O ... tlte ke ladkiyon to kavitaon ka shauk kab se hua :P ... vini tumhaara turn nxt ;)
nice poem ... keep @ it :) -
4:22 AM
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kosha said...
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@saras
thanx :-)
pata nahin yaar...ye blogger ka kamaal hai..maine toh baad mein hi thanx bola tha :D..
but ok..it makes me look foreboder :D
@pommu
he he he..main likhti hamesha se thi...bas post nahin karti thi :D
aajkal post bhi karne lagi hoon.. ;) -
4:47 AM
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Aurora said...
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now u gave me shock dear:)))))
well tlte is now becomin source of poets :DDDDDd -
11:43 AM
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kosha said...
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@megs
maine aisa kya kar diya :o -
12:05 AM
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Alchemist said...
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the only hindi poem i understood everything, rather everything but title :(
wat does siskiyan mean? -
9:31 PM
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Banvri said...
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very rude but very touchy ...
can see the anger in the wrds :0
but i really wonder y so much of harshness towards life in that .. -
1:44 AM
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Aurora said...
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ohho kosha
i want to say this is a nice poem:))))) -
1:55 AM
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coolvir said...
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Hey nice lines :)
And even amazing templete....Loved your blog :) -
11:53 PM
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Phoenix said...
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...ab koi mere dil se poochhe..aakhir ye kiya kyon maine!
Beautiful! -
5:22 AM
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Aurora said...
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hmmmm.....no new blog kosha
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11:49 PM
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yogesh moorjani said...
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beautifully written... just a bit concerned about what lies behind those lines....
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10:54 AM
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Vinod Rajagopal said...
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You write beautifully...!
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8:45 AM
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24 comments:
Thnx for penning down my THOUGHTS !!
maine hi fer liye doston se mooh apanaa...
choot gaya bahot pehale woh daaman dosti ka !!
tumhare thoughts :o :o
baap re tumhe kya ho gaya hai??
kuch bhi ho..
tumhe us se kya?? [>:P]
are...
ab mera koi friend aisa feel kar raha ho toh main nahin poochoongi kya...
@nirmal
thanx :-)
twas like my words penned down poetically
the most deep n awesome representation - thats what i felt..
great writing.. with a perfect title :)
saare TLTE waale paagal ho gaye hain :o
@prasoon
thanx for the compliment...
but y r u so sad??
@raja
kya hua??
beautiful lines :))) keep penning down such beautiful poems :)
waise thnx for removing word verification :))))
It was pretty interesting to see that here you have a quote from " The Fountainhead" but then you orkut profile you just don't mention it. Just a comment. :-)
@vini
thanx dear :-)
@moser baer
well didnt feel like putting it on orkut...just like tht...
beautiful lines :)
btw yahan mujhe jaisa dikh raha hai us hisab se tume nirmal ko thanx pahle bol diya aur compliment usne baad me diya
:o
??
tum bhi kavayitri ban gayi :O ... tlte ke ladkiyon to kavitaon ka shauk kab se hua :P ... vini tumhaara turn nxt ;)
nice poem ... keep @ it :)
@saras
thanx :-)
pata nahin yaar...ye blogger ka kamaal hai..maine toh baad mein hi thanx bola tha :D..
but ok..it makes me look foreboder :D
@pommu
he he he..main likhti hamesha se thi...bas post nahin karti thi :D
aajkal post bhi karne lagi hoon.. ;)
now u gave me shock dear:)))))
well tlte is now becomin source of poets :DDDDDd
@megs
maine aisa kya kar diya :o
the only hindi poem i understood everything, rather everything but title :(
wat does siskiyan mean?
very rude but very touchy ...
can see the anger in the wrds :0
but i really wonder y so much of harshness towards life in that ..
ohho kosha
i want to say this is a nice poem:)))))
Hey nice lines :)
And even amazing templete....Loved your blog :)
...ab koi mere dil se poochhe..aakhir ye kiya kyon maine!
Beautiful!
hmmmm.....no new blog kosha
beautifully written... just a bit concerned about what lies behind those lines....
You write beautifully...!
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