Monday, February 13, 2006
When!!
I see you smiling at me;
When I glance around the stars,
I find you winking at me;
When I try to look at the sun,
I feel the intensity of your love for me;
When I walk on the shore,
I see you rushing towards me;
When I hear the birds,
I hear you singing for me;
When a breeze passes by me,
I feel as if you embraced me;
When I hold a flower in my hand,
I see you admiring me in my lap;
When I am standing in the rain,
I feel the slight touch of yours on my face;
When I smell the fresh earth,
I smell your breath in it;
When I see the mirror,
I can see you in my eyes.
Monday, February 13, 2006
When!!
When I look at the moon,
I see you smiling at me;
When I glance around the stars,
I find you winking at me;
When I try to look at the sun,
I feel the intensity of your love for me;
When I walk on the shore,
I see you rushing towards me;
When I hear the birds,
I hear you singing for me;
When a breeze passes by me,
I feel as if you embraced me;
When I hold a flower in my hand,
I see you admiring me in my lap;
When I am standing in the rain,
I feel the slight touch of yours on my face;
When I smell the fresh earth,
I smell your breath in it;
When I see the mirror,
I can see you in my eyes.
Posted by kosha at 2/13/2006 02:42:00 AM
20 comments:
- Prasoon said...
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i believe the poem could've gone on and on...
nice composititon n situational [acc to the date tom :D] - 7:54 AM
- Raja said...
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hmmmmm .......... smells like fresh love
Happy Valentine's Day, btw >:D<
[the verification word is "LUVot"] - 8:45 AM
- kosha said...
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@mipple
:">
@shailesh
hmmmmm... :-P
@prasoon
yes..it cud have gone on and on...but i had to stop somewhere...
@raja
happy V Day to u too >:D< - 8:52 PM
- Yashu said...
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good one :)
{i know who tht is for :P} - 10:42 PM
- Voice said...
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inspiration? ;)
good one - 11:36 PM
- Mohan Kodali said...
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simple and nice :)
- 12:22 PM
- kosha said...
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@yashu, bhav & chandu
thanx :-) - 8:07 PM
- Mohan Kodali said...
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@Kosha
can u make the text srolling while the background being steady and unchanging? - 2:08 AM
- Alchemist said...
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hey nice poem...will b watching space frm nw ;)
ps:get a shoutbox! - 8:24 PM
- kosha said...
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@chandu
i tried it in the start itlsef...but didnt appear pleasing...so stuck to this type...
@alch
:-) thanx...
well i dont like shoutbox...
@sarvshaktimaan
toh khud likho na kuch :P - 4:46 AM
- Aurora said...
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its simple,sweet,lovely composition
something like just close ur eyes and all this lines comin on ur mind
love this one ;))))))) - 6:06 AM
- Alchemist said...
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mebbe u gt me wrong....i dint ask u to like it!
- 12:32 PM
- Tojo said...
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Kosha I just came acorss your blog space..
It's awsome....Keep it up.
I didn't know your murmurs sound this loud...!
Kudos and Cool Going..!! - 12:58 AM
- kosha said...
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@megs
thanx dear :-)
but still far behind wat u write...
@alch
so i dont keep things tht i dont like ;-)
@tojo
hey....thanx for visiting my blog :-)
and yeah thanx for the compliment too :-) - 10:37 PM
- Alchemist said...
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megs blog rele rocks ...
@kosha...try n b less selfish. X(
i am nt finding enuf shoutboxes to shout in :( - 11:45 PM
- kosha said...
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@alch
really...she is too good at writing :-)
y do u want to shout?? :D - 12:07 AM
- Samyak said...
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Its just the Feeling of love tht inspired to write such an emotionally satisfying simple yet powerful lyrics !!
[:)][:)]
I just Love ... to be in Love !! - 1:55 AM
- kosha said...
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@samyak
yeah its true..
love to be in love :-) - 2:01 AM
- Banvri said...
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beautiful n kinda ..ro ..:P
sometimes u really feel ur emotions in wrds ..n thats exactly happend here - 1:47 AM
- Nandi23 said...
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I like this, the use of the ordinary exemplifies the extraordinary!!!
cleverly written! - 4:31 PM
20 comments:
i believe the poem could've gone on and on...
nice composititon n situational [acc to the date tom :D]
hmmmmm .......... smells like fresh love
Happy Valentine's Day, btw >:D<
[the verification word is "LUVot"]
@mipple
:">
@shailesh
hmmmmm... :-P
@prasoon
yes..it cud have gone on and on...but i had to stop somewhere...
@raja
happy V Day to u too >:D<
good one :)
{i know who tht is for :P}
inspiration? ;)
good one
simple and nice :)
@yashu, bhav & chandu
thanx :-)
@Kosha
can u make the text srolling while the background being steady and unchanging?
hey nice poem...will b watching space frm nw ;)
ps:get a shoutbox!
@chandu
i tried it in the start itlsef...but didnt appear pleasing...so stuck to this type...
@alch
:-) thanx...
well i dont like shoutbox...
@sarvshaktimaan
toh khud likho na kuch :P
its simple,sweet,lovely composition
something like just close ur eyes and all this lines comin on ur mind
love this one ;)))))))
mebbe u gt me wrong....i dint ask u to like it!
Kosha I just came acorss your blog space..
It's awsome....Keep it up.
I didn't know your murmurs sound this loud...!
Kudos and Cool Going..!!
@megs
thanx dear :-)
but still far behind wat u write...
@alch
so i dont keep things tht i dont like ;-)
@tojo
hey....thanx for visiting my blog :-)
and yeah thanx for the compliment too :-)
megs blog rele rocks ...
@kosha...try n b less selfish. X(
i am nt finding enuf shoutboxes to shout in :(
@alch
really...she is too good at writing :-)
y do u want to shout?? :D
Its just the Feeling of love tht inspired to write such an emotionally satisfying simple yet powerful lyrics !!
[:)][:)]
I just Love ... to be in Love !!
@samyak
yeah its true..
love to be in love :-)
beautiful n kinda ..ro ..:P
sometimes u really feel ur emotions in wrds ..n thats exactly happend here
I like this, the use of the ordinary exemplifies the extraordinary!!!
cleverly written!
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