Monday, February 13, 2006

When!!

When I look at the moon,
I see you smiling at me;
When I glance around the stars,
I find you winking at me;
When I try to look at the sun,
I feel the intensity of your love for me;
When I walk on the shore,
I see you rushing towards me;
When I hear the birds,
I hear you singing for me;
When a breeze passes by me,
I feel as if you embraced me;
When I hold a flower in my hand,
I see you admiring me in my lap;
When I am standing in the rain,
I feel the slight touch of yours on my face;
When I smell the fresh earth,
I smell your breath in it;
When I see the mirror,
I can see you in my eyes.

20 comments:

Prasoon said...

i believe the poem could've gone on and on...
nice composititon n situational [acc to the date tom :D]

Raja said...

hmmmmm .......... smells like fresh love

Happy Valentine's Day, btw >:D<

[the verification word is "LUVot"]

kosha said...

@mipple
:">

@shailesh
hmmmmm... :-P

@prasoon
yes..it cud have gone on and on...but i had to stop somewhere...

@raja
happy V Day to u too >:D<

Yashu said...

good one :)
{i know who tht is for :P}

Voice said...

inspiration? ;)

good one

Mohan Kodali said...

simple and nice :)

kosha said...

@yashu, bhav & chandu
thanx :-)

Mohan Kodali said...

@Kosha

can u make the text srolling while the background being steady and unchanging?

Alchemist said...

hey nice poem...will b watching space frm nw ;)

ps:get a shoutbox!

kosha said...

@chandu
i tried it in the start itlsef...but didnt appear pleasing...so stuck to this type...

@alch
:-) thanx...
well i dont like shoutbox...

@sarvshaktimaan
toh khud likho na kuch :P

Aurora said...

its simple,sweet,lovely composition
something like just close ur eyes and all this lines comin on ur mind


love this one ;)))))))

Alchemist said...

mebbe u gt me wrong....i dint ask u to like it!

Tojo said...

Kosha I just came acorss your blog space..
It's awsome....Keep it up.
I didn't know your murmurs sound this loud...!
Kudos and Cool Going..!!

kosha said...

@megs
thanx dear :-)
but still far behind wat u write...

@alch
so i dont keep things tht i dont like ;-)

@tojo
hey....thanx for visiting my blog :-)
and yeah thanx for the compliment too :-)

Alchemist said...

megs blog rele rocks ...

@kosha...try n b less selfish. X(
i am nt finding enuf shoutboxes to shout in :(

kosha said...

@alch

really...she is too good at writing :-)

y do u want to shout?? :D

Samyak said...

Its just the Feeling of love tht inspired to write such an emotionally satisfying simple yet powerful lyrics !!
[:)][:)]

I just Love ... to be in Love !!

kosha said...

@samyak
yeah its true..
love to be in love :-)

Banvri said...

beautiful n kinda ..ro ..:P

sometimes u really feel ur emotions in wrds ..n thats exactly happend here

Nandi23 said...

I like this, the use of the ordinary exemplifies the extraordinary!!!
cleverly written!

Monday, February 13, 2006

When!!

When I look at the moon,
I see you smiling at me;
When I glance around the stars,
I find you winking at me;
When I try to look at the sun,
I feel the intensity of your love for me;
When I walk on the shore,
I see you rushing towards me;
When I hear the birds,
I hear you singing for me;
When a breeze passes by me,
I feel as if you embraced me;
When I hold a flower in my hand,
I see you admiring me in my lap;
When I am standing in the rain,
I feel the slight touch of yours on my face;
When I smell the fresh earth,
I smell your breath in it;
When I see the mirror,
I can see you in my eyes.

20 comments:

Prasoon said...

i believe the poem could've gone on and on...
nice composititon n situational [acc to the date tom :D]

Raja said...

hmmmmm .......... smells like fresh love

Happy Valentine's Day, btw >:D<

[the verification word is "LUVot"]

kosha said...

@mipple
:">

@shailesh
hmmmmm... :-P

@prasoon
yes..it cud have gone on and on...but i had to stop somewhere...

@raja
happy V Day to u too >:D<

Yashu said...

good one :)
{i know who tht is for :P}

Voice said...

inspiration? ;)

good one

Mohan Kodali said...

simple and nice :)

kosha said...

@yashu, bhav & chandu
thanx :-)

Mohan Kodali said...

@Kosha

can u make the text srolling while the background being steady and unchanging?

Alchemist said...

hey nice poem...will b watching space frm nw ;)

ps:get a shoutbox!

kosha said...

@chandu
i tried it in the start itlsef...but didnt appear pleasing...so stuck to this type...

@alch
:-) thanx...
well i dont like shoutbox...

@sarvshaktimaan
toh khud likho na kuch :P

Aurora said...

its simple,sweet,lovely composition
something like just close ur eyes and all this lines comin on ur mind


love this one ;)))))))

Alchemist said...

mebbe u gt me wrong....i dint ask u to like it!

Tojo said...

Kosha I just came acorss your blog space..
It's awsome....Keep it up.
I didn't know your murmurs sound this loud...!
Kudos and Cool Going..!!

kosha said...

@megs
thanx dear :-)
but still far behind wat u write...

@alch
so i dont keep things tht i dont like ;-)

@tojo
hey....thanx for visiting my blog :-)
and yeah thanx for the compliment too :-)

Alchemist said...

megs blog rele rocks ...

@kosha...try n b less selfish. X(
i am nt finding enuf shoutboxes to shout in :(

kosha said...

@alch

really...she is too good at writing :-)

y do u want to shout?? :D

Samyak said...

Its just the Feeling of love tht inspired to write such an emotionally satisfying simple yet powerful lyrics !!
[:)][:)]

I just Love ... to be in Love !!

kosha said...

@samyak
yeah its true..
love to be in love :-)

Banvri said...

beautiful n kinda ..ro ..:P

sometimes u really feel ur emotions in wrds ..n thats exactly happend here

Nandi23 said...

I like this, the use of the ordinary exemplifies the extraordinary!!!
cleverly written!